The first article I am considering for WP3 is one on ¨The Disadvantages for Summer-Born Children”. This article discusses research done by Sharp, George, Sargent, O’Donnell, and Heron on correlational issues with children born in between the months of May and August. The disadvantages are mostly commonly seen in the classroom and measured on their ability in comparison to the older children in the classrooms.
The idea I had in mind, which is aimed at a younger audience, is a children’s book on diversity. Since the article address the issue that the younger children (those born in the summer) tend to fall behind academically, but also mentally because they are not capable of doing/thinking the same way as older children because their brains are not as developed yet I instantly thought of a “moral of the story” type of book. That is, everyone is different and it does not make you any less capable of achieving goals you just have to give it time. The article lists the causes and repercussions of birthdates, the list made me think of the different ways in which people can differ.
As for the adult-geared piece I was thinking of doing like a “When to Conceive” factoid, that could be found in a parenting magazine. I am also thinking along the lines of those genetic ads/sites that pretty much allow you to “pick the perfect baby”. You would chose characteristics of a child you would like and when you get to the end there would be a hypothetical description of one’s future child. In the description, I could include facts like “even though you’ll be a bronzed pregnant goddess the likelihood of your child in falling behind in school is very high”. I feel like the adult audience is more difficult because this article is presenting information that pretty much-deterring people from having children in the summer. The quiz would be more of the visual kind where you either go down, left, right, etc. until you get to the end where you find the results.
*Is it possible if I find a “Benefits of Being Born in the summer” article could I use both in creating something?
The other article I found interesting is on the way in which characteristics are associated with the way in which children grip their writing utensils. Certain grip strength, finger placement, and speed can be correlated with gender. There has been prior research done on this same concept, that being said there is a lot of empirically based claims, there are many numbers involved.
*Still trying to think of a genre that I could use a lot of numbers and data
The older audience piece I was thinking about doing is a Buzzfeed like questionnaire “What Does the Way You Write Say About You?” I could either make it a horoscope looking page where you find the type of style you use and read the description that matches it. Or it could be a multiple choice like a quiz where you select what applies to you and at the end it will guess one of the qualities that are found in the studies.
For the younger based audience piece, I was thinking of a coloring book, where there are images and the word of the image to trace to practice writing. Further, there would be instructions to change the kids hand position to help them find what it comfortable. It would be a practice/activity guide, targeted at children who still working on fine motor skills.
*I know we have examples of other genres to transfer our articles to, but I keeping gravitating towards the same type of genres regardless of the article.
Hey Hannah
ReplyDeleteYour article of choice is something I've never heard before so it’s fascinating, the children book idea could be seen as the safe choice but I think done correctly it can capture all the aspects of WP3. To be more specific you mentioned you thought of having a theme within your book. Something that you might want to consider is explaining why is teaching life lessons important to young growing kids? How will you translate the complex topics of the scholarly article to something children can follow along? Will you include illustrations if so why is this appropriate to this audience?
The Pregnancy magazine article is a good idea, because it can transform the information from the scholarly article to something that can keep the core components but also gives you run to play with it. You mentioned adding a quiz, this is a fun idea because these kind of features are very common for example advertisements and statistics are common conventions for this genre. Just make sure why would a quiz be necessary in order to entertain the audience.
I really like your topic for it is very unique and something I have never thought about before. Especially being a summer born baby myself it was interesting writing your piece. Maybe include a summary about your topic in your WP3 so the reader has some backround going into your essay. Overall I really like your ideas and how much thought you put into it. I also like how you differentiate between the older audience and younger audience. Good job and good luck on your WP3!
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ReplyDeleteInteresting piece! I didn’t know people took the issue of being a “summer baby” so seriously.
I like what you’re thinking here: “a “moral of the story” type of book. That is, everyone is different and it does not make you any less capable of achieving goals you just have to give it time.” This piece does appear to have a pretty clear moral/lesson/virtue, so I think it’s a pretty natural fit. That said, I want you to narrow down who your intended audience is. A children’s book could change significantly depending on whether it was tailored for a kindergartner, a 2nd grader, or even a 4th grader. Some light background research about what the expectations are for such an age-dependent genre will probably help you situate this.
A “When to Conceive” factoid piece” in a parenting-focused magazine sounds like another great idea—they’d benefit from knowing this information, right? That said, what facts will you pull out, and why? And what tone will you strike in your writing? This could be a delicate/sensitive topic, depending on the specific publication, but it might not necessarily be, so I think a little bit of background research could help you get a feel for how specific magazines approach such topic. One question I have is: what would the benefit be of a follow-up quiz? To make sure the parents retained the information in the article? That seems a little bit unnecessary to me, unless the quiz targeted something beyond the specific facts.
I see that you might be a bit unsettled and you’r ethinking about other ideas—which is totally cool and smart—so here’s what I’ll say: first, ask yourself: (1) what am I really trying to capture here, and (2) who is my specific audience and why? THEN, think about the big, great, wide world of genres that are out there, floating around—what 2 embody what you want to bring out of this scholarly piece?
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Hey Hannah!
ReplyDeleteI think your topic choice is really interesting and you can find a lot of creative ways to do really interesting things with it ! I'm a little confused about the article what i gathered from it was that the original article talks about how kids that are born in the summer are at a significant disadvantage development wise compared to kids who are not so would your children's book on diversity get that same point across? (In terms of the fact that the article is saying that kids born at different times really ARE different? [I may have just misinterpreted what you had intended to write though so if that's the case then never mind..]). Your idea for the parenthood pamphlet is really awesome I really liked it and i definitely think that it's 100% something that actual parents would stress out about and read through. I hope you pick the one about the differences in the months that babies are born!!
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteFirst off great start. I like the variety in your ideas. It’s good and very beneficial that you did not stick with just one article or transformation ideas. This will definitely make it easier for you to find one that best fits.
Your children’s book idea really caught my attention. Your article really lends itself well for this transformation. It is definitely something I look forward to read if you decide to stick with it. One think I am a little confused with is the factoid idea. Is there a specific adult audience you are directing to? Would this look like a quiz style? From your description, I just did was not able to picture a visual image of this factoid.
Once again, your coloring book idea for the youth audience related to your second article choice is very eye catching. I especially like the instructions you will provide within the coloring book. This idea coincides really well with your article.
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteFirst off great start. I like the variety in your ideas. It’s good and very beneficial that you did not stick with just one article or transformation ideas. This will definitely make it easier for you to find one that best fits.
Your children’s book idea really caught my attention. Your article really lends itself well for this transformation. It is definitely something I look forward to read if you decide to stick with it. One think I am a little confused with is the factoid idea. Is there a specific adult audience you are directing to? Would this look like a quiz style? From your description, I just did was not able to picture a visual image of this factoid.
Once again, your coloring book idea for the youth audience related to your second article choice is very eye catching. I especially like the instructions you will provide within the coloring book. This idea coincides really well with your article.